Talk:Sacred Band of Thebes

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Remaining dab link

I've removed all but one of the dab links in the article and also removed the dablinks template. The remaining dab link is redirectd from medized to the "dab" page medism. It's not actually a proper dab page though -- it contains a short article about the relevant medism, and a two sentence definition of an irrelevant medism. I will tag the medism page for cleanup. In the meantime, since there isn't an article page for the relevant medism and the dab page does contain relevant information, I am leaving in the link to the dab page. Susfele (talk) 04:24, 10 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead too short

The lead is 70 words compared to article c. 6000. Should be around 1/25 of the whole article. Soerfm (talk) 13:34, 2 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Misleading short description

The short description summarising the article which appears just before the article is opened, gives this résumé: 4th Century BC Theban gay military unit.

Though brief and succinct, it's obviously misinformative. Though gay is widely used to denote any level of same-sex attraction and activity; it actually signifies someone who only has sexual relations with other adult males. Leaving the definition of adult to one side for a moment; clearly the military unit was composed of both beardless youths and married men, i.e., men with wives. In terms of a definition which specifies gay men, this is a constructed sexuality which does not give an accurate picture. Nuttyskin (talk) 01:23, 31 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Does the lead make sense?

The Sacred Band of Thebes was the only elite heavy infantry of select soldiers, consisting of 150 pairs of male couples which formed the elite force of the Theban army in the 4th century BC, ending Spartan domination.

What does this mean?

"[They were] the only elite heavy infantry..." what does this "only" refer to?

The only elite heavy infantry...ending Spartan domination?

The only elite heavy infantry...which consisted of 150 pairs of men? (When and where does this only refer to? Thebes? Ancient Greece?)

The only elite heavy infantry....which formed the elite force of the Theban army? (If so, at least missing a comma before 'which formed')

The only elite heavy infantry in X time/place? (Not specified in this sentence) 14.202.151.158 (talk) 08:58, 8 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Done, I have rephrased this. Zenomonoz (talk) 09:04, 8 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]